Dog
1 Attachment(s)
Ive started modeling a dog, i thought it would make a nice change from pachyderms
Only really started on the head, i think its important to note that this is not a specific bread or a friendly family dog Besides the creases any C&C? Obviously only just started |
it's nose looks more like a pigs than a dogs nose, especially with the shape of the head
|
are you using Bolt as your reference?
...I think the ears look kinda funny, quite square near the base where they meet the head. |
I think it looks like a Shiba Inu, if thats what you were going for then ide say it looks pretty good so far but different angles would be helpfull for crits.
|
I started using bolt as a reference but soon realised that that wasnt a good idea, so i used my own dog as a ref (cocker spaniel)
Thanks for the crits Im definitely with you on the ears, not sure what to do to sort them tho... I agree there's something wrong with the nose/snout, cant put my finger on it though |
I just think the head is too big or snout is too small... However if i were in your position i would aim for a specific breed of dog as it will make your life easier and give you better references for what you want to create.
T |
i thought it was a pig-fox-hybrid ;)
i think mainly because the ears look a little weird (maybe too small? too narrow at the bottom?) and the nose is too small compared to the nose... (um... i dont know what dog parts are called) the thing with the holes for sniffing looks too small for the part of the head that its on... maybe it looks like a pig because the cheeks are so round and high? |
Quote:
|
oh right
for some reason i thought the snout included the nose... so yeah... |
Quote:
|
1 Attachment(s)
blocked out the body and worked on the nose, plus a few other minor changes. Im not ready for crits on the body but I need some for the snout
Im still not sure how i should change the snout. do you think the new nose looks better? I had a bash at the ears but I not really sure how to sort them, I might go in a completly different direction with them, like a jack russell I want the ears to look a bit like this http://static.howstuffworks.com/gif/...t-friend-1.jpg but im not really sure what to do to get them there do you think they should be bigger? any c&C is greatly appreciated 1. |
1 Attachment(s)
2.
|
1 Attachment(s)
3.
|
1 Attachment(s)
It's starting to get there elephantinc,
About the ears, I agree they need to bit slightly larger, and I think the part where they enter the skull needs to be "Flattened" a little, and have slightly more of a corner to them, they look slightly to curvy there at the moment. I've added an image to illustrate what I mean, hope it helps! Also I think the eyes sockets are rotated slightly to much, only a little. And the top lips could do to bit more rounded, the way they look now only really happens when a dog snarls, the ones in the image I attached show what I mean. Apart from that it's looking good so far! KUTGW |
thanks, thats a big help :)
;) :beer: |
All times are GMT. The time now is 03:46 PM. |
Powered by vBulletin® Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Simply Maya 2018