critique time
 

Hi sm surfers,

As always, it is a pleasure to be a part of this community of artists. I would like you all to check out my latest animated short. It was created for the 10 second club competition. I thought last month's audio clip was interesting, so I was inspired to put something in. I kept it simple since I had only recently gotten back into 3d animation after I finished up a couple ongoing 2d projects. The first clip is what I did for the competition; the second clip is what was on my demo reel before. I would appreciate some words of wisdom. Compare that to where my skills were before and tell me what you think. I appreciate any feedback on this. Thanks everyone!

http://www.artofkevin.com/4516.mpg <-----for ten second club

http://www.artofkevin.com/video02.html <-----my skills before for comparison

www.artofkevin.com

if the mpg file doesnt play all the way through, try refreshing the browser or typing in the url directly. I have no idea why it doesnt play the file completely the first time.

Nice animation.