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mc-fleury 15-07-2005 05:56 PM

first human head wip
 
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here is my firt human head. i hope you will like it because for one of the first time, i like what i have done lol.
i would like to make batman head...but i dont really know what i am going to do with that head.
c&c are welcome.i really need some critique.

mc-fleury 15-07-2005 05:57 PM

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head side

mc-fleury 15-07-2005 05:58 PM

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high res wire

mc-fleury 15-07-2005 05:59 PM

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finaly low res mesh wire

errethakbe 16-07-2005 01:56 AM

there's too many triangles in your mesh. try to get as many four sided faces as you can. It'll give you a cleaner model as well as make the smoothed version look nicer. I think you could also get rid of a few lines and keep the same shape. It looks a bit dense in some parts it doesnt need to be in the unsmoothed version, but changing as much as you can to 4-sided faces should help with some of that. The nose is also really pointed, but that should be easily fixed.

Its looking good so far though. Just clean up your geometry a bit and you'll see a big improvement in how it flows.

So how are you modeling it? All poly? Nurbs to Poly? etc?

Keep up the good work...and make him smile! he looks sad :p

mc-fleury 16-07-2005 04:25 PM

thanx for the comment i will do what you said.to model that head, i begin to model th very basic shape with nurb and i convert to polygone.ibegin with a sphere and after i "create the wire by myself"its why there is triangle in my mesh

mc-fleury 16-07-2005 06:42 PM

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just i a little update. i shaped the node correctly and i smoothed the face a bit

mc-fleury 16-07-2005 06:43 PM

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side

mc-fleury 16-07-2005 06:44 PM

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persp

matt4068 16-07-2005 08:13 PM

nice work, still need some work though, i think his chin is too wide to be batman, and jawbone. and some treeking to the eyes, batmans noes doesnt have big nostrils either, check out this image it might help

http://hollywoodcostumesandparty.com...batman%203.jpg

http://hollywoodcostumesandparty.com...n%20front1.jpg

mc-fleury 16-07-2005 08:47 PM

thanx for those image and for your good conseil:beer:

matt4068 16-07-2005 09:03 PM

no probs

Angalid 17-07-2005 02:45 PM

good job!
looks like a micheal jacksson noose. :attn: Keep going!

mc-fleury 17-07-2005 04:16 PM

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just a little update

mc-fleury 17-07-2005 04:19 PM

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side


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