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FubaR 07-07-2004 05:01 PM

Ford Focus
 
please some crit !!!
hi...i read through the ford focus tutorial but didn't make all they said...
this is just a wip so I will change the tires and the shader on the car(the reflectivity is a bit too high) and I will surely smooth it one more time... ;)

that's enough of writing, here's the picture... :)
http://people.freenet.de/das-steve/car_wip.jpg

ransick 07-07-2004 11:16 PM

make sure you smooth this baby down one more time again cause now it looks like ehh....well ...it just doesn't look right...hehe :nervous: ...
the things you said yourself is the thing I would comment about...keep on going with the detail and replace the plane ground with a other tex cause this is.....well...it isn't right :p :) keep us updated...

NextDesign 08-07-2004 12:43 AM

Or convert it to sub-ds

Reimo005 08-07-2004 09:32 AM

good start although you need to add lots of edges to sharpen it up. Add some to arount windows and to the rimholes.

FubaR 08-07-2004 12:40 PM

thx for comments...sure I will replace this ugly stone tex.
It was just a testing texture for the shader.. ;)

By the way...I've got some updates and will upload them later this day...(going to watch spider-man2 later - nice cg in it !!!)
did you know that the whole city is cg when spider-man is swinging through it.. ;) )

sorry...drafted away from the thread !

FubaR 13-07-2004 06:29 PM

Hi..I've done a shader for the rims now and I changed the tires.

http://people.freenet.de/das-steve/car_wip2.jpg

Jay 13-07-2004 08:17 PM

Dude

MMM, I'd really sort those windows out, wheels look fine but if you're following a tutorial try and stick with it or you'll make yourself look a bit silly, no offence, just advice.

_J

NextDesign 14-07-2004 02:05 AM

And just a suggestion, finish the model, then texture.


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