how is my work your comments please
 

Hello every one

how is my work. This frame is a part of my short film. The film is not yet finished. I need your comments on it . so please help me...

If thats a pool table.. the side pocket is not shaped correctly.

The felt is too bumpy(pool felt is incredibly smooth. Smoother the felt the more movement you get out of the ball.

The balls have higher specularity aswell..

The bumpers go to about 3/4 to 7/8 the way up the ball. And have more of an endge on them.

hi
 

hi
thanks for the comments. I will surely change it.:bow:

Hi, I think that the refection on ther bookcase is a little to high to

Best of luck

hi

good point. i wil surely change. thanks for ur suggestion.bye it..:beer: