Writings
Here is something I wrote. I think its good, but needs work. Its supposed to be song lyrics, and Im working on guitar riffs and all for it now. Lemme know what you guys think. :) Comments are much appriciated.
Open Up Verse 1: You know who you are Stop denying yourself You’re better than that Be the man you are Death isn’t the answer Emerge from the shadows of your dreary life You need to see. You need to be your true self. Chorus: Come out of the shadows Let people know, how you really feel Cause your driving the wrong way Stop. Turn around. Look at your life And turn it upside down Verse 2: Take that beat inside your head And turn that thing right up Your better than that Be who you are, and live out your life You need to see. You need to be your true self. Outro: If you saw, how we are You’d turn yourself right around You’ve got friends, you’ve got us And know, where not going away |
Wow right on my man, Very up lifting lyric’s, Most of the stuff I write is about love and all that crap, but you got a tight piece of writing laid down. ;) good work
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Yea, thats about my friend, who dosent think too high of himself. He thinks he's bad at everything, and has no faith in himself what-so-ever. Here's another one. :)
Remove Verse: Every good thing brings a bad thing Just when you thought you had something It’s taken away from you Quicker than you can blink Try as hard as you can Chorus: It won’t matter Nothing exists anymore In the end Nothing matters Verse: Control who you want Say what you want Do what you want Nothing matters Take my life away As if it were never there Outro: I trusted you to do what you said So take everything away from me You selfish bitches I don’t want it anymore |
Heres a song I wrote after my divorce, If the link works : ) a few friends have a little band and we kick out a few tunes here and there, Mind that I’m not a professional arties I just pick and sing the best I can.;)
Jedi |
Think I fixed it?
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the link to jedi still doesnt works to me
gipsy sounds good man:cool: |
Hey thanx,,
I think I fixed it,, but then ???:D :D |
Jedi....I like it. One thing that I dont like is the short amount of time between the chorus and the interlude (about 2:25 in the song). I think it should be alittle longer between the two. But other than that, I like it.
Gipsy...It wouldt let me DL it. So Ill check it alittle later, and check it out. :) |
Yea My DSL company is cheap as hell and use's third rate server for Their custmors,, it should be up in a little while.
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Heres another one. For those who dont know, I moved upto upstate NY (USA) about a year and 1/2 ago, and I hate it up here. One day, sitting in school, I was just really mad at everything and everyone around me. So that was my fuel for this one. Still thinking of a name for it. Gladly accepting suggestions. :)
Intro/Bridge: I’m tired of wasting my time (I’m tired of) wasting my life Verse 1: This place makes me sick Snobby, preppy b*tches They wouldn’t know responsibility if it hit them in the head Driving around daddy’s car Well f*ck your car, f*ck your family F*ck your lives, f*ck this place Chorus: I’m so sick of these lies (I’m so) sick of this place (I’m so) sick of these people (So) F*ck you and yourself (F*ck) you and your friends It’s a virus waiting to be spread Verse 2: I left a good life for this I must be crazy Having a lot, now nothing No one knows what its like I’m living in hell But no one else knows No one else cares Except for one Outro: Just take your shit And leave me alone |
how a bout ( Solitude ):confused:
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Glad you liked the songs,, but got's ta take em off the server,, needs the space.:D
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Its kool Tiller. I already DL'ed them. :) Solitude....hm...Ill have to think about that one....
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Anyone else have any writings they'd like to share? Im interested in seeing what you guys/girls have written. Im working on something, that I really like. So once I get that done, Ill put it up. Its called "Give It All Away". :)
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