My 2nd work! Not a big deal!
 

Jus i tried! this may be disgusting for u! forgive me, me dont know much! jus i started to work in maya! soon i`ll catchup i hope! need ur comments plz!

Fire looks good.
I would change your text to 3d text. I think that would look better. You would get a nicer render from it as well.
Good Job

at least this one is more related to your name... the whole 'sniper with flowers' thing was laughable... but still well done.