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sleepy 10-12-2004 08:38 AM

My hip hop nephew
 
Hey you guys! here is a WIP of my nephew that im gettin close to getting done. I have alot of texturing left to do. So here it is, please C&C Thanx

Latez

http://members.shaw.ca/edross3d/My%20Webs/images/S1.jpg
http://members.shaw.ca/edross3d/My%20Webs/images/S2.jpg
http://members.shaw.ca/edross3d/My%20Webs/images/S3.jpg
http://members.shaw.ca/edross3d/My%20Webs/images/S4.jpg
http://members.shaw.ca/edross3d/My%20Webs/images/S6.jpg
http://members.shaw.ca/edross3d/My%20Webs/images/S7.jpg
http://members.shaw.ca/edross3d/My%20Webs/images/S8.jpg

FubaR 10-12-2004 12:51 PM

nice, although i don't like those clothes :D
but very nice modeling and texturing.

vladimirjp 10-12-2004 01:40 PM

nice modeling.
the ears look like thy could use a little work. but its hard to tell from those angles.
the croutch area of the jeans look a little off.
texturing looks great :tup:

roach105 10-12-2004 01:48 PM

The jacket looks awesome but the pants seem a bit off to me. Not sure if its because the pants are puffy or look to short. Other than that its awesome

RubberChicken 10-12-2004 03:14 PM

Damn thats cool!!! Gr8 job!
The only thing wrong that I can spot is that the croutch area is a little small.

uberstonks 10-12-2004 03:33 PM

Have you used Maya cloth for the clothes or are they nurbs ?

Great Job ..

sleepy 10-12-2004 07:53 PM

Hey there thanks for your C&C. Ill post some more views up later
I think I may have to fix pants up, it does look kind of funny. And no I didnt use Maya cloth its just plain polys.

Thanks again

Latez

Jay 10-12-2004 09:32 PM

Dude
Overall nice model, but...I think his head is rather long or the eyes are too far up towards his forehead. It looks a little odd there and also the pants could do with making longer over the boots and maybe cut some creases in there, as they look like they're hovering at the moment.

_J

sleepy 12-12-2004 12:48 AM

UPDATE
 
Hey Thanks Jango I took your advice and fixed his head and pants to even out the proportions. I also added some wrinkles to the pants a bit more and lengthened it to make it look like its not floating. I didnt add any to the jacket as I feel it doesnt need more cause I wanted a puffy winter jacket type look. Ive also added a pic that i used as ref.

Thanks guys!
http://members.shaw.ca/edross3d/My%2...images/S25.jpg
http://members.shaw.ca/edross3d/My%2...images/S20.jpg
http://members.shaw.ca/edross3d/My%2...images/S19.jpg
http://members.shaw.ca/edross3d/My%2...images/S21.jpg
http://members.shaw.ca/edross3d/My%2...images/S22.jpg
http://members.shaw.ca/edross3d/My%2...images/S23.jpg
http://members.shaw.ca/edross3d/My%2...images/S24.jpg

AgentCapt 25-12-2004 03:05 AM

Very Nice Modeling!! Cant wait to see this guy on BET...

antiant 26-12-2004 08:54 AM

Wow great stuff. Amazing modeling.. How are you rendering, with final gather?

IMG4 27-12-2004 02:48 AM

Wow awesome Modeling, very nice texturing :)

Daandrumz 28-12-2004 09:38 AM

Looks very nice man. Maybe the laces don't look great, they are a bit flat like this. And they seem to be a bit floating above the thing underneath it (don't know what it's called :)).

Jay 28-12-2004 11:24 AM

Daandrumz: Its called the Tongue dude, also it looks fine I would say as I wear my trainers very similar during the summer. Nice n Loose, also laces look fine, as not all are round.

Great model keep it up
_J

Daandrumz 28-12-2004 06:10 PM

thnx for the 'tongue' :) (I'm dutch). In the last picture it's much better. But when you wear the shoes, the laces and all will always be right on top of the tongue, and first here they were like floating.


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