Breakdance Scean
 

Well ... i first wanna say .. that im sorry for not working on my millitary scean and not finishing it ...

Reasons : i was making a movie called War - peace ... and i go at a tournament where the judges said " 2 years before there was a topic like yours and u steal the idea" WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i was :eek: :eek: :eek: and just said f*****k that ... so i don't wanna hear about that anymore ... thats why ... :angery:

So about my project i am aiming in making intro for my breakdance crew and i will use 3D movie for that it will be attractive i think :attn:

I'm thinking of making some buildings for background ... one car .. etc ... I will work hard to get fantastic scean ... ;)

Looks like an excellent start to me. I love the non uniform fence, adds character.

If you do plan to put in some more detail, make sure you don't spend too much time on it, and also make sure it doesn't "overpower" the rest of the scene (including the character); in other words, make sure it isn't an "attention whore" :p

That aside...I think that light could either be a little more intense (brighter), and/or cover a little more of an area (radius).

The lamp looks a little small? I'd picture it to be a common streetlamp rather than a huge office / desk lamp :)

Cool apart from that tho! Nice job on the fence :)

small update

2

I start doing the character here is the mouth ... and help of improving it will be :bow:

And here is the wire

haha great job with the new breakdance scene, i love everything youved done to it; the fence, new lightpost, broke chair etc :) well done man... not crits for that atm though there are some for the face :p

you probably know this but if you dont, try clean up the buttom part where i have circled in red, since that is making everything soo sharp which is resulting in a sharp buttom chin...

goodluck, looking forward to seeing mroe updates,

marlon

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/836/fixgq8.png

I never done a complete human model so i will need some help ;)

a Little help with the nose i need ... it's not looking too natural i think :headbang: :headbang: and suggestions how to fix it coz it's been and 1 hour i'm modeling it and i can't get a nice form

2

heres a couple of pictures of my nose, though im not really satisfied with it i hope it helps you with yours :)

have you added the eyes in yet? they help alot when your trying to get perfect size for the nose ...

could you also post a proper full head picture of your character, thanks ...

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/6050/66645061yw4.png
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/795/74263901cs9.png
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/9132/59769168ec4.png

if you post wireframes, post them unsmoothed, not much help for a beginner otherwise...