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jali 05-07-2007 03:00 AM

my first animated short
 
hi

this is my first animated short, all comments are welcome!

http://www.metacafe.com/watch/711382/vanhel_singh/

Weyu 06-07-2007 04:15 AM

Well i suppose that those purple lines when he jumps down shouldnt be there. :) Otherwise good job for a first.

Its kinda hard to see but it looks like the warewolfs teeth doesnt follow the jaw.

And the diablo begining doesnt really suit with the batman begining, you should stick to one. :)

jali 06-07-2007 02:00 PM

thanks forthe reply, your right the teeth did follow the jaw, i was having trouble with it,


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