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small update
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Wery nice will you make scene, make some coast with ocean!!! :)
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that is the plane. will be on a coast. scene will be a sunset type with gof and some stuuf like that.
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Here is a tip, In real life you never seen thigns too brightly lit. My advice here is that you use spot lights to create a negative intensity on the edges to make it appear less boxy. Textures add depth to the most flat geometry so keep that in mind. Link your lights always, label them.
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It feels top-heavy. I think the balcony is too deep.
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I like the artistic aspect in my opinion, the textures are well done. The Tower might need more complexity in my opinion like windows. A blowing flag maybe some stairs going around the balcony would look nice.
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Whell there could bee some stairs but some kind of fire emergenci stairs, but the main stairs are inside of lightning towr!! I realy like jour texturs and whole model!! Kep it up
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thanks for the crits guys. the lighthouse does seem like it has something missing. I will try to add a window or two. Also after looking at the top of it it does look a bit top heavy with the huge balcony. I will try to ring it in a bit.
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Jea the windows will work good , to make your lightning house more interesting!!!
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another small update. added windows as recommended and also made the top end of lighthouse smaller.
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Thats what i was talking abouth, wery nice, more details please!!! And more renders posted please :)
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Very nice texturing. What about turning the light on and shining it out over a foggy sea? You could make the light cone visible in the fog.
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I will be turning on the lights soon
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Weary nice idea Clod, make the mistical ,scary fog around the ligh tower!!! Whaiting for new renders!!!
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another render. Im not that good using light fogs. can anyone give tips on how to get the edges more gradient.
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