Bathroom_interior
 

Hi guys,

heres a bathroom interior i did for my friends house, the bathroom was being re-furbished at the time and he asked me if it was possible to see it finished as a model before the work was finalised at his home.

crits are welcome, and yes his bathroom was that big!! MASSIVE i know.

cheers

Scene looks very good!
Though it's one weird looking big bad-ass bathroom:p

It looks nice, but… is it just me, or is it a little distorted? :confused:

Looks good though theres some thing about the shelf the sinks are sitting on, the wood texture looks a little largs and it seems like its floating, which I think is to do with the texture size

great looking work, great looking bathroom... not a fan of the sinks tho. just not my taste.

what did you render in? vray?

yeah - nice job - got to agree tho - the sink isn't really working for me at the moment. is it supposed to be wood or marble? also, is there no plumbing - where does the water go?

ouch i`m already digitaly plucking splinters out of my arms washing myself there every day hahahaha :)

It looks cool thou the mirror above the sink looks a bit weird, looks like one is angled? is that ment to be?

The floor is kinda blury, and seems like there are no grooves.

Looking at how the sinks work its kinda naked. You`ll see it when your sitting down in the bath. And makes the room look half done. So i would make a nice cover underneath the sink, same for the bathtub, there its gonna collect lots of dust. Repairing the bath will be much easier thou, but its a dust magnet underneath there.

Of sorry i`m more talking as a plumber rather then an artist :P

The overal feel is very nice,

Thanks for all your crits guys, i need to do my final render to get it looking more crisp. This model was just for a friend and he needed it quite quick so i never really went all the way with it i.e all the detailing,maybe i should finish it? and maybe i should be thinking more like a plumber rather than an artist :)

This model was rendered using vray,good guess how did you know??? and it took around 20mins to render, yikes i know.

oh and the sink shelf is suppost to be marble!

cheers again guys

It looks nice (render quality could be higher though). One of the first things I noticed was that the blinds were mysteriously floating in frameless windows :x and I think it looks bare because your camera is framing an area of the room that pretty much empty (btw where am I supposed to make poopie?). Also, the counter tops look like splinter central, and the medicine cabinet seems kinda deep (maybe a bit picky but it just seems like it is). With some more work I think it would look pretty damn great.

Cheers Gect,

in the layout of my friends bathroom, the poopie (toilet) is located just behind the camera on the right so i thought i should'nt model it,but then i guess that could be me being lazy, i dont know why everyone is saying that it looks splintery lol, its suppost to be a marble top, hence the reflective shiny surface, oh well i guess ill keep working on that 1.

cheers again dude, hope miami is well.

:confused: Am I missing something?

huh, tht was for Gect.

didn't anyone tell you you shouldn't pass pictures taken as 3D graphics?
:p

it looks pretty cool, but whats that thing in the left corner? is that a shower? he's going to slip and die when he's done there....

lol, i know, thats his walk in shower. you should see the rest of his house,jammy git,lol.

I know... I meant the dude part :p
Benny

well whats wrong with the word "dude" lol.

she's a she, not a dude :p

nice scene man, the floor tile thingys look really wide to me though:beer:

ahhhhh, light bulb. i see. i havent been on this site long enough to know. oh well my apologies to you. dudet then lol :)

can't dude also apply to women?

...btw, i have no idea why i guessed vray; has anyone tried maxwell renderer?

lol, that works :p

the same way "guy" is no longer discriminant against gender?
...probably...

Lol scrappy, its cool. And the counter doesn't look like marble because of all the parallel lines and no reflectivity.

i thought it was made of wood... it looks like a wood texture

eeerrrrmmmm ooohhhhh yeah it is made of wood.lol. ill sort the model out soon, iam working on a tramps junky apartment at the mo. ill post it up when finished.

cheers again guys

DUDE! DUDERS! DUDERINO!

*shrug* sorry. the base for the bathtub seems a little... unstable. one rock in the wrong direction and i can totally see those wooden things tipping and the whole bathtub crashing to the floor...

yea the popular concensus about the countertop is valid but it is really hard to place because although there is a slight specular highlight along the rim, i've never seen marble that looks like that. i can see how people could mistaken it for wood, but seeing that ONE highlight made me think otherwise. is there a glass door for the shower area? cause i can't seem to see one and especially since there isn't a step ridge separating the shower tile from the wood floor i could see a lot of water leakage/splashing issues. i know the purpose of a critique is to give constructive criticism for the lighting and modeling and texturing, but i really can't seem to see anything that's not been already said. oh maybe a 'where are the lights?' cause i know of no bathroom without vanity lights near the mirror at the sink.

I noticed that highlight also but it made me think, ok the sides had formica laminate but the top was old rough wood, marble never occurred to me.

There is a glass panel for the shower door, if you look really closely you can see the edge of the of the panel and the groove in which the panel sits in, which seperates the tiling on the floor,
i totally agree about the bath blocks they need widening alot for stability of the bathtub.

sorry for the pixelation, time is just not on my side at the mo.

cheers again guys

wait.. uh...
am i the only one who thought that the shower doors and wall were/are off the floor? :confused:
sorry, i thought they were (made sense for the doors to be off the floor at least, or you wouldn't be able to use them) >.<

There sliding glass panel doors so they have to sit in a grove of some sort, to slide

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
*runs down the street naked shouting "EURIKA!"*

*cough* ahem... perhaps a bit too dramatic...

i get it now, i thought there was a gap between the two glass panes for some reason and so the dooors swung out!

er... sorry, but where do the glass doors slide to?

also, showers are not usually level with the floor - they normally have a step or an area you step into.

i don't think a critique should be just about modeling or lighting - it also has to be about whether the picture makes sense.

True, true. I believe Technical knowledge, aesthetics, and believability are all important indeed.:beer:

yes .. i tried it and i tried also the fryrender engine they are all perfect for rendering archeticture frames and you can also get the advantage of the physicaly based engine of them BUT they are really expensive in render time to obtain a good quality frame with zero grains you would w8 a 12 hours or more.

arran,

obviously from the image i renderd you wont see all that detail, i did say at the start of this thread that this was a quick model for my friend. its incomplete! i've taken everyones crits into consideration and i will use them accordingly.

Thanks again.

Pretty good render !!!

:beer:

That was an extremely nice render. Your lighting is very life-like and your models are really well done. The only thing that is a bit eye catching to me that while this is a bathroom, its almost as if its not a bathroom. It seems naked without towels and such to make up its extras that makes a bathroom a bathroom.

I hope that makes sense....:confused: