March Challenge - Environment - skippyk39
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Think I'll take a break from my Apache and give this a try. :)
Came across this image for inspiration, and I hope to create something similar to it. |
hmmmm looks good man...kind Blade Runner feel to it...is it a drydock?
cheers bullet |
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Kinda looks like one, with a sci-fi feel to it.
But I'm going to go in a different direction, so here's what I have so far. I'm gonna fill it up with rooftops, with a combination of modern architecture and sci-fi. Started playing with the lighting setup, it might be a tad too dark, so I'll keep working on it. |
crap man that looks damn good mate...yeh a tad dark but it depends on what you are trying to convey...I dig it...nice apocolyptic feel to it...though it could also just be demolition?? this looks promising
cheers bullet |
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Thanks bullet. Yeah, kind of going for an apocalyptic feel, but not completely over the top like you tend to see.
Been playing around with the lighting some more, I think it still needs some more tweaking, but I like the direction it's taking. I doubt I'll get this done in time, but hopefully I can get the modeling done anyway. |
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Changed up the lighting again, and I think I like this setup much more. I'll keep tweaking it as I go, and hopefully get some modeling done for the next update.
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The lighting on the last one is good, makes it all look very ashen, post apocalyptic.....
J |
I agree with Jay....looks like a volcano has erupted or something
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Thanks guys, it might need a few minor tweaks still, but I'm quite pleased with how the lighting is turning out.
I added some basic geo for the buildings in the distance, to give it a bit of a sci-fi feel. Gonna start planning out the buildings in the foreground next. |
I think this is looking fantastic, really looking forward to see this one finished
G |
Its funny both my fav entries at the mo both have alot of fog and tall buildings. Very moody scene so far well done.
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Thanks for the feedback everyone, much appreciated! Hope to have an update later today.
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Here's an update. Added some more buildings to the distance.
I'm trying to figure out what I want to do with the foreground, whether to make the buildings sci-fi or modern and have them run down. Guess I'll just keep gathering reference and figure it out as I go. :P |
Mate......I dont know what it is about your entry but...simplistic yet dynamic is all that I can say! I would maybe thin the fog JUST a little...not much...to give slightly better res on the buildings. I would put a few dead computers maybe in the foreground? or something similar....and..my thoughta only...just a single plant or similar to represent regrowth? either way its cool mate..I like it
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Look great so far, I love apocalyptic stuff. The little pebbles add a nice touch to make it seem more chaotic.
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While figuring out what else to add, I started detailing the foreground a bit. Started sculpting some detail into the concrete, just need to tweak the displacement map a bit in maya to get it looking right. |
aaahhhh thats better...and you deleted the 2 buildings in the foreground and changed one at the rear left...it looks more spacious now...not so cramped...well done
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I really like the feel of your scene. The geometry and the lighting seems to fit well for me. I wonder if a little more randomness in the tiny debri lying in the foreground might look a little more realistic but not too much randomness. I think the tiny pieces look great at the size they are but they seem just a bit too familiar to each other, too much like they are all copies from the same piece of geo.
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Not much of an update, just sculpted in some more details into the debris. Playing around with a shader for the floor tiles as well, not quite sure what I think of it though.
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Looks good, you have foreground and background, perhaps some mid distance stuff??
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Thanks Jay. Yeah I plan to add some stuff in there, just not sure what to add yet.
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So I decided I'm going to build a collapsed bridge/highway for the mid ground. Nothing that will make it feel cramped, hopefully.
I also added a bit of foliage along the side, like bullet suggested. I like how it looks, but I'm not quite sure if it fits, or maybe it needs to be placed somewhere else. |
It looks good mate...the only think I will say...is the plants look good but 'appear' as they should in a photo..if you get my drift?? you expect them to be there...I would have at least one of the vines come up from the bottom twisting around one of the vertical I beams.
Cheers bullet |
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Think I know what you're getting at bullet, something more like this?
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yeh thats it...and some on the I beam coming down on the top right...you sort of dont want to flood it with plants as it will take the focus off the scene I think??
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Yeah, I agree bullet. I added one more along the right side, and built some geo for the bridge. Think I'm going to call the modeling done, minus a few tweaks. Need to save some time for texturing.
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sweet....looks good mate...good luck with the texturing!
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Yep, you're getting a very nice feel so far, liking it!
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Thanks guys! Hope to have an update in a day or two.
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Nice updates. I like the way you've incorporated peoples thoughts and suggestions into your environment. It's looking better and better.
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