the render is far too dark to make anything out at all. I would add some fill/bounce lights to you scene (remember that CG light doesnt bounce (Unless it's raytraced) so you need to compensate for this. One bad solution is to add a low intensity ambient light (but that will remove depth from your scene (as it illuminates everything equally). A better solution is to use point/spot lights to add extra light.
Good luck
Alan
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