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# 10 29-01-2004 , 03:19 PM
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Location: Paris, France
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My crits... to add to the others:

(1) The light is too white for a tungsten bulb - it should be a little more yellow.

(2) The toilet-side wall is too clean - you maybe need to texture this.


That'll do donkey... that'll do...