is this just in poly mode? cause if it is than it looks really NOT clean I have to say! you need to make sure that you keep as many quads as possible! triagles is your second option but under no *subconsenses you should do *otherwheis! also what I need to mention is that you will probably want to make less polys as possible cause you will only make it harder on yourself... with a few polys you should get a nice body and than you can use splitpolygon to add some detail or make more polys (to attach a leg or something...) at a later time

also what would be a great Idea is to start off with nurbs... It's easy to handle and you can get a nice body with it...If you want you can allways change to polymode later if you're more *confrontable with that... That's just something I learned from some of the tuts here at SM!

*don't look at my english...I know it's bad... Im too tired to grab my dictionary :p lol

well these things I wrote down is just to help you further out.....you can see what you do with them

I hope you will not take these words as a negative but use it in a positive way