it just needs more detail.
Places like, where the USB connector and buttons connect; well anything that intersects with the body of the device would need to create holes (boolean) in the main device to allow the actual device to pass of as a real manafactured item.
After that get working on UV mapping out the texture for the body etc... The materials you choose for this is really important also.
Chris (formerly R@nSiD)
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