M8, it's definitely getting there! The skeleton tracks better now - nice job. However, the UFO interior seems a little dark. Perhaps remove the color grading from this shot as it's a different environment to the outside shots. It's a shame that you cannot add something else to the 2nd interior screen like a computer readout or etc.

The final shot is a tricky one to sort. I had a thought about adding a virtual cam track to 1st add a little drama but mainly to help re-direct the audience attention away from the victims in the crowd. This way you can vaporise someone and pan to opposite side and shoot again.