Jean,

On the whole good, but here are the things I would amend/change:

• At the beginning you have your name that falls into a flag and then appears the Canadian Flag. Why not have your name overlay ed on the flag and hen fade it out?
• The child cycling is on for a bit to long.
• I really like the VFX shot with the "water child" (i think that's what it is :blush: ). But a moving backdrop would have been nicer
• The swimming pool splash is quite lacking in realism, it's slow to happen and the liquid appears very Viscous.
• I really like the kid jumping onto the pad and then becoming a wire frame, I would get him to stop and walk off after 2 turns and then get the adult to do the same. Very good idea that one, I like it.
• I agree about the music, I feel like I should be watching a horror or intense thriller. It needs lightened.

No offence intended on those comments m8. Its a good demo reel, but these are the bits i would look at changing. Good Luck