yeah - i definitely agree with fartopf's comments - at the moment it just looks too smooth - the camera doesn't really add anything to the drama in the scene.

Again, sorry to be picky, but I really I have to ask what are you trying to say with the scene? I'm not necessarilly opposed to what you are trying to do, but at the moment it just comes off as something that is trying to shock - rather than actually being shocking. Like the photo - is the person someone who is jealous of the family, is it the mum, is it the dad? And the disconnect between the realistic photo and (i'm sorry) your non realistic modeling just adds an element of humour that I don't think you intend... or maybe you do?