A good start. I think the biggest offender right now is the mouth. Its very wide and flat. Dont forget the mouth goes 'around' the face not just across it.

I would advise using reference for heads, anyone can throw a head together, but if you want it to be convincing enough for positive feedback too, get the references out.


Check out the Topology thread. Its in the WiP part of the forum at the very top. Always worth a look if you are stuck or need advice. It saves alot of repetative comments too as there are several issues discussed in there.


Cheers
Jay