Hi m8,

good work...

Ill do these one at a time...

Dialog is good but I see issues with the rigging as you seem to have some pinching and interpenetration of the arms and body. Its most noticeable when the animation to "and the line must be drawn here" part. All inall its good and I like the theme of using roaches to fit the battle of man against insect

Mime is a lot better and the steering wheel seems to hide the issue I mentioned above. It might just be the angle, but on the 2nd car horn when he turns to my right (his left) when he gestures with his hand they seem to penitrate the car body.

All in all they are a good bit of work and I think you will do well with this.