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# 2 13-05-2009 , 10:03 PM
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Hey Coldwave..... I didn't see this thread down here.

Nice model. The face looks good, and the body does too. But I think the arms are a bit too long, and the legs are way too short. Also he seems a bit narrow at the hips.

Other than that he's looking good!

So, i would say just work on your proportions. And a bit of anatomy, though at this poly level your not going to need to worry about that too much. Just try and get the proportions and weight down at the mo..... then details.

Also, wire look good too. You might have some problems around the face, as you have a lot of vertical and horizontal edges, and not too many profile edges..... hard to explain, just edges that conform to the masses of the face, like the loops you have around the eyes and mouth. I'm not too sure though. I think yours should be fine.

Nice work!


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