hey nice job chirone - yeah, definitely agree - really like the organic aspects of your ship.

one thing tho - i would definitely lose the writing in your final image - for one thing - the phrase you've used actually doesn't make any sense - but also, by slapping a meaningless slogan on top of your work, you really devalue the image - your forcing an abstract concept on to your image - and it just ends up look cheap and rushed - if you really need to have text on your image than it needs to be integral to the image - because ultimately you're making it subservient to the text.