Hi it was a while since I last posted here. I just wanted a fresh sets of eyes on this project. Even tough I wont work on this piece anymore it'is always nice to get some critique. It is a school project where we have to make a commercial for our class. It has to be exactly 20 seconds long, and if you wonder I just started my second year of college. The work was done in Maya, After effects and Photoshop. Short 3d film