The scene is getting there.
- It feels kinda odd to have the egglettes holders be placed next to the edge of the table like that. I like the original idea of having the eggs being cornered there after having no other place to run. I can imagine one of the egglettes peering over the edge afraid.

- Having the staff to the egg's side feels a bit casual giving the situation. Try positioning the staff, so that he holds it infront of him so it looks like he is on guard. this should also make the hands more obvious.

- I like how you put more of the egg beater in the shot. however, because of its angle, it feels like its less threatening than before. Having the blades point in line with the eggs shows where the blades are aiming for.