no that's great, any C+C is welcome good or bad! The thing with the motion is that it's not keyframed. It's all generated before hand by a flocking system I have written. Thus I dont control how much the bank and roll etc. I have kinda sorted it for the next render but it's really hard to sort it out completley (lots of nasty rotation matrices and vectors etc). Also it's worth noting that the planes are toys and so i can take a bit of licencse with the motion etc. I know that's not entirley obvious in this render but hopefully you'll be able to see it clearer in the next one (coming tomorrow morning once the frames are rendered at uni)

As for the speed (again controlled by the program!! ) I am going to hopefully model a kids bedroom and have them flying around in it so that will help give an impression of speed. (I hope!!!).

Thanks again for the C+C it was really good to get some really objective opinions on it