Ok major update:

Here is the new cut of the animation (it's still at 320 x 240 for now ) And I know that geometry is missing in some scenes this is intentional so that the renders are speeded up. I'm looking more at pacing and timing for now.

I've speeded up the planes and they seem to fly much better now (I've got a little script that I wrote to manipulate key frames around that i will post later).

The third to last shot is very weird and the camera goes beserk that will be fixed soon and the shot right before the first smoke one sucks major ass. I'm gonna fix that one too.

The floor texture has been fixed (but isnt in this version) I lowered the bump map cause it was far too harsh for the close ups.

Ok folks get it here: https://www.alanwoods.co.uk/files/cut.avi

Hope you enjoy it and give me some feedback on it.

Oh and the shot where the first plane takes off and the second one follows is too long by far so I will be sorting that too.