Hi there buddy..

Great improvement. Almost there.

You done a real great mouth. But you might want to curve the lower lip a bit - it looks a little too straight (i hope u understand what i mean). Like Emo - i think the face look too flat. It might be the nose that is VERY flat - or is it the angle ?

But hey! i think this is the best first head i have ever seen !!!

Keep it p dude.