Hi,

quick comment, her head shape is still too rectilinear at the moment, her jaw is strange as is. It needs a bit of tweaking, the angle of her lips/jaw in relationship to the rest of the face is odd. Either the jaw moves back or the forehead should come forward. Body wise, I' d say raise the hip area a bit (not the butt) - you see what I mean most evidently in front view. The body is very good though.

last thing. Definitely boof up her hair to make it a bit sexier (maybe a ponytail)