Hey Mat,

Just saw your anim, and I like it. I agree with the points above, theres no anticipation before the rake. Why not use the butteryfly as his distraction so he doesnt see the rake. Put it in a position that is out of his current path , he walks off his path to follow the fluttyerby and then stands on the rake. Still obvious, but htis kind of comedy always is. Its only really missing the anticipation. Lastly I think hes on the floor for too long, but that might just be me

On the playblast I think the 2nd part really doesnt fit in, I like the unconsious dream sequence idea... But where to go with it its the question.

Great Work m8. Well Done and keep it up.