hi everyone! im currently doing animation at the ANU in Canberra and have recently 'finished' the last semester animation. The down side was that i only had like 13 weeks to do it in so its not completely done...plus its been graded so its not important. Just now i want to refine it and re-render all the errors out of tha sucker. So i'd really appreaciate some comments on how it can be better visually...but nothing major please.

The animation is meant to be B+W with touches of colour.