Thread: The room
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# 14 11-02-2003 , 02:10 AM
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Almost gallery worthy.

I still think the height of the middle level is too low. If you put a 6-foot tall person underneath, there's maybe a foot or two of clearance. That makes for extremely cramped quarters in the sitting area.

Now that I look at it some more, the door on the right/lower level seems a bit small compared to the couches. Either the couches are really big -- 4 ft high -- or the door is really small -- 5-6 ft high. Something needs to be adjusted.

Also, I would adjust the framing of the image to eliminate the black background. That might entail adjusting the camera and/or moving objects around. We should be seeing the room not a part of a box with interior elements.

The lighting looks really nice though.


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