Originally posted by stwert I thought it was pretty great for a first animation. Some things I noticed. The walking doesn't match the ground, you've got a bit of moonwalking going on, to put it one way. As tweetytunes mentioned, some of the body mechanics could use some work. Also, one action does not need to be completed before the next is begun. For example, he would probably still be approaching the lift button as he lifts his hand to reach for it. Some of the actions could be faster as well. As for the ending, I was anticipating that the suit would give him control over the elevator... you could work that in maybe. Speaking of anticipation, look up the 12 (I think?) principles of animation and see how many you can work into your short. Keep up the good work! Thanks stwert! Yeah, the walk cycle definitely needs work as well. And great point on you don't need to wait for one action to end to start another. I think maybe when you're doing this you're so focused on thinking "okay now here I want him to push the button", you don't even realize that in a real life situation a lot more is going on as that's happening. As far as the ending and showing that he has control of the elevator I like that. I suppose I tried to imply that but it's definitely open to interpretation. Keep them coming guys, I'm working on my next animation now so I want to make a list of things to lookout for and keep in mind! Great stuff, thanks again stwert!