Here is something I wrote. I think its good, but needs work. Its supposed to be song lyrics, and Im working on guitar riffs and all for it now. Lemme know what you guys think. Comments are much appriciated.

Open Up

Verse 1:
You know who you are
Stop denying yourself
You’re better than that
Be the man you are
Death isn’t the answer
Emerge from the shadows of your dreary life
You need to see. You need to be your true self.

Chorus:
Come out of the shadows
Let people know, how you really feel
Cause your driving the wrong way
Stop. Turn around. Look at your life
And turn it upside down

Verse 2:
Take that beat inside your head
And turn that thing right up
Your better than that
Be who you are, and live out your life
You need to see. You need to be your true self.

Outro:
If you saw, how we are
You’d turn yourself right around
You’ve got friends, you’ve got us
And know, where not going away