Very nice model - Good looking render. For me the dials, cable and mouth peace look unfinished, shaders wise. Is there a reason they are white ??? Looking at some ref (as I never seen one of these before) the dial are usually a chrome color with the mouth peace being Grey/Black over the different models, but could not find the one you modelled. Again just its just what I think looking at it - The other shaders and model it self look spot on. As for depth and AO - There is no harm rendering them out and playing with them as it would be good practice. Tweety