Hi Dragon3D, right here's my comments: The modelling is ok/fair it's too basic. Get some more detail in there into the joints etc etc nuts bolts wires etc etc. They don't have to be detailed persay but just knobs and twiddles etc. "The texturing is up in the air It's fairly non-existant!! Get some maps on there and make it look like it's been in a few wars before etc Going for the "nice clean look" means you're being lazy The Animation on the bots ok, it's quite smooth maybe could be more mechanical. Lose the big swinging camera move though it's awful! Use cuts if you want to show different stuff. The particle effects are ok, nothing special, you could try to make them a bit more interesting (and speed up the first ones as they feel like they are flying through treacle!) I look forwards to see you taking it further. :bandit: Alan