Kyraal

I dont think you could have chosen a better mesh to follow for your first attempt, Stahlberg is the man!! Great start, though I think you're being a little over zealous jumping into Z. The bridge of the nose has become pinched, and has ruined the form of it entirely. Also theres a poly at the base and back of the jaw that could go, instead of having the loop come down and round the jaw, redirect the flow under the jaw instead.

Look forward to the rest.

Kind Regards

Jay