Mmmm. She's looking a little rough. Need to attach some of the edges. ( the line down her chest)

Also, use more lights. Try using a 3 point lighting system when trying to show off your model, and take them out if the black void.

Also, take off shadows if you're just doing the WIP thing. Shadows aren't necessary until you're showing the completed model. Otherwise, some details may get lost in the shadow.