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# 73 24-10-2003 , 11:23 PM
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Excellent, perhaps focus on the banana a bit as the door opens as you don't quite get the nude shock thing when she screams and I couldn't exactly see what was going on, so the reason for the scream seemed a bit underemphasised. I'd agree she needs to 'scream' a bit more too. I really like the bloke's expression and the way the eggs bob about is priceless. Coming along really nicely, the movements all look very natural and well weighted, cool stuff.