Hi there,

Really nice so far!!!

Nice gag!

Questions for you to ponder re his attitude

Is this his last strike or his 'homerunning' first

How much does he weigh

how masculine/feminie is he....(an interesting play on his physical appearance juxtiposed with a world weary cross dressing wimpy dweeb mentality could be funny.

How does he relate to his peers>
Is he pushed from his peers (out of screen off to the right) into frame as if to say go on you..........

If there were wind blowing which way would it be coming from and how much. Would he be effected (I could imagine 2 thirds or the gag being getting to the batting position into the wind, only to be hit in the face by the ball)

I hope this is helpful

Great stuff, looking forward to seeing more


re Jim