Thread: Male Head
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# 29 12-09-2006 , 01:24 PM
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Good start, much much better. Though you have too much detail around the lips at this stage and what is the purpose of the edges above the lips that end on a 5 sider? remove it. Get rid of the tight loop thats near the lips as well, concentrate on form alone right now because thats where the previous character went wrong, and by keeping the head res low you can do it easier with arsing with the details...

Also I woundnt have the lips or nose done either until the rest of the loops were positoned better. Try to keep them as evenly space as possible. Sometimes you may have to redirect and split new loops to replace old ones and by have the two elements above done now will only make it harder.


Still a long way to go but keep it up

Jay