here is some constructive C&C so you ocan improve your work.

you many unecessary polys, the mesh is way too dense for such a generic face.
work on the topology of the eyes and mouth,
i think the chin is too pointy and extruding forward too much. the ears needs lots more works.
the hands needs much more work also . i would re-do them.
i can't comment on the body too much since the view are so obscure and at weird angles.

practice makes perfect. that is how you will improve, otherwise if ppl keep saying "it's coming along great" when its not, you will not improve so much.

i hope you find this helpful and not condecending in any ways.

:tup: :rambo: keep working.