Happymat!! first off mate, sorry i haven't commented in a while - I always seem to catch your updates at work where i can't watch video. second - this looking awesome! Well done mate - i'm really loving all the details - ha ha - his checklist is great - reminds me a bit of wes anderson if you know what i mean. the new intro is great - it works really well - and i like the squishing into the window ending - i imagine it will be a good lead into the mr death character - is it the moth that he's ticking off on his to do list? one thing that bothers me is the moon - it looks like you have a sphere - i know you only see it briefly, but i think it would be better if it was flat - so you don't see any shading - at the moment it just looks like a ball floating in the sky. yeah - the walk still needs some work - that jerk needs smoothing out and i also think he could do with a bit of a side to side sway. At the moment it just seems a bit too up and down. as always though, these are minor crits! keep at it mate!