Is it better from this angle?

I wanted the chest to to be flat on the bottom to look more plate like. It's looking odd because there is detail that I have in my head that is not in the model yet.

I think with the right bump map and scale texture map they will not be as noticable so I wanted to exagerate the edges.

Really appreciate the input guys. This is where I really wish I was more of an artist. I know the basic anatomy but I have little drawing and sculpting skill to draw upon.