I think it really looks good. The textures will also pull it together. Just remember to spend almost as much time on the textures and lighting as you spent on the modeling. Are you going to paint the hair or are you going to use paint effects? Keep up the great work.

At the risk of sounding stupid are you really from Beverly Hills? I live in phoenix now but I grew up in the Aliso Viejo area in So. Orange County. I just used to say I was from LA because until recently because of the show THE OC no one would know were I was talking about.