don't be too hard on yourself mr pix. i thought it was pretty good - the sound was a bit harsh and the movements still a little smooth - i felt like it needed more contrast in the way she moved. overall though, i thought it was great - you've clearly put a lot of thought into what she's doing depending on what she's saying which i'd assume is the hardest thing to do.

good luck with animation mentor. my mate - adam gard - is into his second term and loving it.