Quite a nice picture - I like the 60-70's retrofeel, the wallpaper rocks.

C+C

the pillows look replicated and for that reason, bad. You should just jiggle some cvs and get them to not look so uniform - it wouldn't be so bad if they were them squareish throw pillows, they do tend to look the same, but your ones are kind of like free form and its regularity is disturbing.

the room looks as thought the ambient light is too bright. with that one light, it wouldn't be that bright

the carpet looks kind of odd on the right side of the pic - while on the left side, they seem to go with the perspective. I think it's the way they seem to be catching the light from the lamp. A little strange.

you should move the pictures up a notch. about 0.6-1cm going off that picture would be better. They're too low and fight with the eye for attention

with the lamp where it is, should't the martini glasses and shakers have at least a bit of forward leaning shadow? It looks odd that they're pointed the other direction.

and finally, you could try bumping the luminance/color factor on the pics up a bit. they look a bit gray in comparision to the rest of the scene