Hi there,

I have to agree with what gster said, and I would get rid of the 2nd boat and spaceship, because a potential employer will very likely not watch a reel twice, and see them as repetitions. You have to spell things out for people sometimes, if you want to show that two similar models are different, why not make a closeup.
Also the typo bars at the top and bottom are not helping (I think) I'd say you want the models i.e. the viewable area to be in focus and as big as possible, anything around is distracting. I'd just put a small watermark in one of the bottom corners
And finally the music, well it's a matter of taste but it is kinda aggressive unless you know the musical taste of your potential employer I'd be careful with something like that.

good luck with you jobhunting