it's looking better and better. the next level would be to give it some character. it all seems kind of evenly spaced - it might be more interesting if it was a little more accidental, chaotic, realistic.

maybe if you dirtied it up a bit. cracked something, dented something, made it look more like a scene... i notice the bottles are empty with no caps but look perfectly scrubbed clean. Also why are there so many glass dishes on the table? if they're empty they should have some ice cream left over and a spoon or two in them. is it a diner? You've got lots of nice modeling, reflections, maps etc. here - take it to the next level